I'm a Senior Staff Writer who writes a wide range of topics, spanning from people's real-life drama to pop culture to funny things I find on the internet.

"I apologize for the confusion in my previous response. I was providing feedback as if you were a student submitting work, but it appears you may be sharing this as an example of feedback you've given to a student, or perhaps testing how I respond to student work.

Could you clarify what you need from me? Are you:

A student who has written this paragraph and needs help developing it into a full assignment?

Sharing an example of student work and want me to provide different or additional feedback?

Asking me to evaluate the feedback I just gave?

Once I understand what you're looking for, I'll be happy to help in the most appropriate way."

Text says: "My teacher lost my final that took a week to do and gave me a zero, claiming I never turned it in."

Writing says, "This obviously isn't English."

Text says: "My French teacher gave us new 'French names' about two weeks ago (more than halfway through the school year) and takes off points from your exams and daily participation if you don't refer to yourself by your French name and others by their French name, like???????????"